Rise of the Machines [Full combat training session]

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OOC: Ok, that's all I wanted to know lol. I was just thinking that if the spell lasted indefinately then we wouldn't be able to fight anymore lol. Which would be such a shame hehe. ;)
 
OOC: lmao :D ok then. Well my post will be a great post then! Stuck as a bear lol

BIC:

:: As Christian went to feed on Tobia's exposed neck, he heard him say a spell. Christian pulled back and knocked Tobias hard on the temple. He was then about to counter or something with a spell of his own, but was too late! Redered useless as he was trasnformed into a teddy bear!::
 
OOC: Let's just say we include the OOC posts lol ;) So when you post next you can change back from a teddy bear hehe...

BIC:

:: Just before his spell wears off, Tobias grabs the teddy bear and tears off it's arm and throws it a few metres away. In theory when the spell does wear off Christian's arm will not be apart of his body anymore. ::
 
:: Aware that Taryn had seemingly dropped out of the fight, Sati frowned slightly, but stepped forward, facing Dierdre. With the slight flick of her hand, she sent a blast of telekinetic energy towards Dierdre, sending her flying backwards through the air, to bring her crashing down onto the hood of a parked car - more to get her attention than anything else ::

"Alright. You're going to be fighting me from now on."

OOC: Fight has been extended to Sunday.
 
:: The spell finally had worn off and Christian, back in his normal body, found himself armless once more. The pain was unbearable, but quickly faded as his powers of limb regeneration kicked in. The arm replaced in seconds, again a funny look coming across his face::

"You know, blowing up my arm is getting somewhat boring and annoying......"

:: Christian's omega tattoo on his neck began to glow a dull blue, his Demi talisman beginning to work. A Demi mist forming around Tobias.::

Enshroud your enemy in a dark mist of glistening, luminescent vapor descending from a demension without visibility, causing blindness to one enemy.

:: With the demi mist surrounding Tobias, Christian took this opportunity to attack the mutant. Punching him as hard as he could in the face, the blow at least enough to keep Tobias stunned. Christian then whipped out his own garrotte. With professional ease, Christian brought over Tobias' head and around his neck and with brute strength, began to strangle him::
 
:: Tobias is taken completley off guard with the Demi Ring, seeing as though he has never encountered one in a battle before. He is stunned when Chrisitian punches him in his face and then starts to choke due to the garrotte. As he is getting strangled, Tobias causes a Fire Cascade around Chrisitian, melting his flesh. He tries to feel for the garrotte around his neck, finding it hard due to his lack of sight, and then he slips it off from around his neck and throws it on the floor. He gets into a defensive position trying to call on his other senses, particularly hearing and waits for either an attack from Christian after he has found a way out of the fire cascade, or his sight to return. ::
 
OOC: Alright, this training session is now over. No more posting in this thread.

My critique will be posted shortly.
 
First of all, I have to say that I'm very disappointed with the level of activity in this training session. I extended it from three days, to seven, and yet there was still only one active pair, Christian and Jex. I did specificaly say at the start of the thread that if you had no opponent, to PM me, yet nobody did. As such, I WILL be fining people - and I will also be more generous than I normally would to those who bothered to turn up and actually fight.

That said, I will move onto personal critiques.

Sweet Misery and Titus did not show - therefore, you will both be fined 1000 Gil. You had a week to turn up, and failed to do so. That seven days, in which neither of you checked this forum. Missing training a second time may result in DEMOTION.

Angelus Noctem - You got off to a promising start. I liked how you countered the banshee cry, and you used hypnosis effectively in your only battle post - although you could have done something far more deadly with that. Unfortunately, you dropped out after only two posts. As I know something of your circumstances, I will grant you 500 Gil for taking the time to turn up and post something.

Phoebe - I am aware that you had problems with fighting because Taryn stopped posting. HOWEVER, I did post offering to fight you, and two days later you still have not responded. I will comment on what I saw of you, which, again, is not much. You seemed to have at least made some effort. However, try to work on being as descriptive as you can, you could have said after the banshee cry exactly what effect it would have upon Taryn. But you used illusions to good effect. I would have liked to have seen more of you, however. I award you 900 Gil for turning up and making some effort.

jex_charmedUK - You were punctual, active, and you fought well. I saw you use a variety of offensive and defensive techniques such as weaponry, spells, general powers and species powers well and to their full effect, which really is what this session was all about. What I will question is whether or not you would have had time to cast a spell before getting bit - remember to post as realistically as possible. All in all, a good, enthusiastic performance.

Christian - You were also punctual and active. I liked to see that in your posts you seemed to strive to add extra detail, using a well developed roleplaying technique. It was alsways clear what you were trying to do. You used your powers well, and I noticed especially that your physical skills seemed solid and well described. I felt that even with the level difference, you put enough effort and creativity into it to stand up against Tobias, who was three levels higher than you. Excellent performance.

Something that I noticed all round was that people are not using their surroundings effectively. You had the wrecked remains of a city to use against your opponents, and I didn't see much, if any of that.

For activity and a good effort, Jex_CharmedUK and Christian will be both be awarded 2000 Gil and a bonus talisman each, which you can request from the Infernal Keep.
 
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